Rough Draft by James W. Hall













Strong, entertaining read

Published in 2000 by St. Martin's Press
352 pages 

Rough Draft is my first foray into a book by James W. Hall. I found it to be an entertaining read with a couple of really good plot twists. The original premise of the FBI sting seems so silly that I cannot imagine anybody would permit it, but once I got past that part it was a great spring break thriller.

James W. Hall
While the villains were fairly interesting, I found myself really rooting for the underachieving FBI agent, Frank Sheffield.

 I wonder about the source of Mr. Hall's fascination with Indiana. I'm a lifelong resident of the Hoosier state so I was interested in the fact that the main bad guy comes from Evansville (his bare description of Evansville, even though it is vague, tells me that he's never seen it or has not seen it in a loooong time). Also, his knowledge of Indiana geography seems a bit sketchy since he has the boy in the foster care system in Evansville yet committing crimes in Indianapolis. They are a good 2 1/2 to 3 hour drive apart. Plus, Hall mentions some overweight teachers from Fort Wayne in a bar trying to get lucky with some Cuban lotharios. Yes, my beloved Hoosier state, home to serial killers and desperate big girls...

 Despite that, I give this book a final rating of 4 stars out of 5.

 This book can be found on Amazon.com here: Rough Draft by James W. Hall.

 Reviewed on March 30, 2007.

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